Written in 3rd Grade. Madison described it as a mix between "The Wizard of Oz" and "Narnia".
"Annie stay here and I'll go get Mason" whispered ten year old Bob. Annie and Bob were hiding in Annie's closet. Outside the witch was putting Mason into a steel cage as she began stirring up a twister tornado. "Come Mason and let us to to Timbuktu,to my home, and with your on my side nobody can stop ME and then I'l take over KANAS!" said the twister witch.
Bob rushed out of the closet and as soon as Bob got outside, Mason was saying to the twister witch, "OK I am ready to go!" Annie rushed out after Bob and said, "Bob I know how to get Mason back," as she was about to cry. "How?" asked Bob. "Jellyroll! He is an owl that can turn into a wizard," said Anne. Bob did not know whether to believe her or not be he had no choice but to believe her. "So where is Jellyroll?" asked Bob. "Get dressed and I'll show you," Annie replied. Annie pulled back her long, dark brown hair, put on her short sleeve red shirt, black shorts and her mom's old dusty brown boots. Bob put on his black pants, his dad's black cowboy hat, his pink shirt and shoes. "He lives here in my closet; all I have to do is call him, Jellyroll!" yelled Annie. Bob saw a snow owl. It swooped down in front of him, Bob yelled at Annie to get Jellyroll out of their house. And then right in front of them Jellyroll turned into a wizard. "Hello Annie," said Jellyroll. "Hello Jellyroll," said Annie. Bob said, "So, Jellyroll, how do we get Mason back?" "Well," said Jellyroll, "you and Annie do the work, and I just help you." "But Annie and I don't know how to get Mason back," Said Bob, panicking. "All you have to do is follow me," said Jellyroll. He turned back into an owl and flew out of the window then landed on their front porch. Bob and Annie came out and ran with Jellyroll but Jellyroll flew, and in a flash Jellyroll poofed them to Timbuktu. As soon as they got there they saw the witch's house. It was dark green with spider webs. Annie ran toward the witch's house. "No, Annie stay here!" Bob said. Bob ran after her. She stopped at the witch's house Bob picked Annie up and ran to where Jellyroll was. "Annie what do you think you where doing" Bob yelled. Annie started to cry. "I was just trying to get Mason back, I, I really miss him." "I know Annie I miss him to." Still crying Annie said "Can we go inside the witch's house now." "Yes" laughed Bob. They tip toed inside and found Mason. "Oh I know how to get Mason out of that steel cage." Whispered Bob, the witch was sleeping. "How?" asked Annie. Bob took a box of matches out from his pocket lit one and told Mason to back up and then he will get him out. So Mason was on the right side the match was going to explode in 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1, BOOM! The match made a big hole in the top of the cage. It made the witch wake up "Oh no," cried Annie "Bob light the witch on fire." Screamed Mason as he climbed out of the cage. Bob took one of his matches lit it on fire and through it on the witch. The witch blew up. And then Bob, Mason, and Annie went home and never saw the witch ever again. So Bob, Mason, Annie and Jellyroll all Lived together and never had to think about the Twister Witch ever again. THE END!
3 comments:
Madison, you ae so talented and smart! Keep that creative spirit! I love you!
Aunt Linda
Your details are great Madison! I love the idea of a Twister Witch. Your story has a good message about smart kids that know when to ask for help and work hard to help their friends.
Wendy Minks
(your mom's friend)
good story, keep creative.
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